Temptation to Sin

TEMPTATION TO SIN

 I sit here thinking of my sins

Overwhelmed by just how many there are

But my biggest sin is YOU

Tempting from the day I met you

Bombarding my brain with thoughts of you

I knew that temptation was setting in

When I looked at you and thought of kissing you

Temptation was full blown when my thoughts went to making love to you

Why, oh why---did you have to be my temptation

I did not want to sin with you

You would not leave me alone

STOP being so nice to me

You make me sick because you make me laugh at you

Now you are constantly on my mind

How can I get you out of my brain

Now you kissed me and, oh, so well

I fit so well against your body

Now it is a thin line between temptation and sin

Then one day temptation turned into full blown sin

What am I to do now

Guilt befalls me for following through

And, YET, I do not feel the guilt

Now I just want to know--

When can I sin with you again

Reviews

[Awdures]

The intensity here is apparent, sin is unavoidable with some people!

[Susan]

good poem. question for you though...what is the difference between sin and temptation. And why feel the guilt, if it/he feels so damn right and good.

[Ladysue]

Temptation as one reader put it can sometimes become full blown love...this piece was raw and very well expressed...

[BlessedLove]

Sounds like a sticky situation...
poem was raw...and i can relate.

Good write! :)

[Tate Morgan]

NOT A LITTLE IN LOVE FOR YOU THERE SEEMS ONLY ALL OR NOTHIN

[Janice Ann]

Temptation is something we as humans live with everyday and I think we live with the consequences of our actions...Temptation is sometimes all we face...and if that is all we face how can we refuse? This piece is well written, honest and raw oh and I can't forget WELL said and beautifully written!

Janice Ann

[.Bunnie.]

^.^ Sometimes that tempting sin can become something so beautiful and wonderful, though...like full-blown love! My hunnie bunnie is the love of my life...and he was that rotten little temptation that was extreme from the first moment I laid eyes on him. Still is...the lil s**t.... -.-

Cute poem...it's easy to relate to. Great job! :) I hope your tempting little sin is worthy of you!!

[Maria F. Rojas]

nice written, I totally feel this.

[Susan]

very good. Love the imagery that you write/present here.

[THE LOST ROSE]

I disagree with Lady V. Don't stay away from us men just some of them. LOL. This poem speaks from everyone heart on this site. To write poetry is to live and if you have live you have expereinced what it is you wrote about. If it wasn't for the temptation to commit sin I probably would not be a writer if that is what I am. I have to channel that energy somewhere so I choose a pen and pad!