Growing up

Very expressive, I was in a very bad place at the time of writing this.. You wanted emotion, your getting it.

Growing Up In A Small Town,

Full Of Pill Heads And Tweakers,

I Can't Even Criticize Cause I Committed My Self To The Green.

My Little Brother Even A Weed Feen We're Just Reaching Out To Be Seen .

Growing Up With A Father Who Was Always Judging Me,

A Mother Who Would Always Lie To Me. 

Got Damn Why Can't They Just Be Proud Of Me?

Once I Turned Sixteen, That's When They Stopped Hounding Me.

Maybe I'm Just Lucky They Didn't Pound On Me,

 Growing Up Being An Outcast, Always Pointed And Laughed At!

Got Told That I Was Beyond Fat, There Was No Need To Respond.

My Fists Were Like Magic Wands,

One Swing And They Were Gone,

Blacked Out From Dusk Till Dawn!

 Growing Up Is Like Rowing A Boat,

The Current May Be A Little Slow You May Even Find Yourself A Bit Low,

So Just Know When The Wind Starts To Blow,

The Current Will Begin To Flow That's When You Go To Show THAT You're Life Is Beginning To Grow! 

Author's Note

First timer, Showing anyone my writing..

Reviews

[XtheBand-ofMisfitsX]

Oh my goodness I am so sorry if this is a true story. Based upon your profile photo, you are a very beautiful young girl, and anyone who told you those things should be punched right in the face. I loved the part where you wrote, "My Fists Were Like Magic Wands, One Swing and They Were Gone!" That was very creative of you. You are an amazing writer, and please don't ever stop writing. Thank you for taking the time to read my review, I'm very new here and I don't really understand the website all that well... Anywhoooo! You're writing is beautiful, as you are... 😄

[Lilly17]

My writing comes from real life experiences.. Thank you for your kind words. :)

[XtheBand-ofMisfitsX]

Oh! My sincerest apologies that you had to experience these horrible events. You are such a beautiful girl who does NOT deserve that.

[Gee]

Hi Lilly, reads like a rap song. Good to see you've picked up the pen as you certainly have a talent. Very much enjoyed reading your piece

[Lilly17]

At the time of writing this piece it was meant to be a rap song.. Thank you so much, your review means a lot.