Inspired

This story is just something I'm writing on a whim. Please do not feel inclined to give me reviews full of useless fluff that I'm never going to find useful. I would appreciate it if you would give me information on what you think I could improve on. If you tell me how you think it should turn out, I will disregard it, but if you give me suggestions with ways to phrase dialogue better, fix a repetative spelling mistake, then I will gladly improve my work. Just remember that if you want the story to turn out differently, write one yourself. I don't tolerate people trying to change the personality and joy of my writing.
Also, for anyone that speaks the languages that are present in this book, for there will be several, I speak four languages, that doesn't mean that I am perfect at all of them. If you have a better translation for me PLEASE let me know! There are times when the nuances of foreign languages escape those who are not natives!