Music

Music

A Poem by Meradee

Music,

It's all around us.

The bird's song up in the trees,

The whisper of the wind in the leaves.

But it's more then just the sounds of nature.

Music,

It's the laughter of children,

The bounce of the ball on the pavement,

The steady beat of running footsteps as fun is being had.

All of these things an more is,

Music,

It's there,

You just have to pause and listen for it...

© 2008 Meradee


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Honking car, running water, footsteps, hammering sound....
Yes, I hear it all the time.

It is everywhere but most of the time, we are too busy or caught up in other things to notice that it is indeed present.

Lovely poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Beautifully written. A lovely poem. Music is all around us if we just listen. So true. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


so true and beautifully written : )
couldnt have wrote it any better
music is everywhere
and i agree you just have to stop and listen
overall an amazing read!
-arabella


Posted 16 Years Ago


So true...especially if you have a musical ear; you hear it anywhere and everywhere.
Music is amazing like that :]

Posted 16 Years Ago


How beautiful. The imagery is fantastic! I love the images you choose to bring -

"The bounce of the ball on the pavement,
The steady beat of running footsteps as fun is being had."

You are incredibly talented. I like how many of your poems can be short, yet they pull so much energy and lay it out so nicely for your readers.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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This is a well-done poem. I like the examples. You also tell us to pause and listen for it, I love that because so many people are "in a rush" they never stop to listen, to see, to feel anything anymore.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on December 23, 2008

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