You are a Gem

You are a Gem

A Poem by Meradee

When gem appraisers look at a gem

To make sure it is real,

They don't look at the quality of the cut,

Or the so called 'perfection

Of the gem.

Even the famous Hope Diamond.

The appraisers look for natures hand in the creation.

If it was made in a factory then the gem is...

Flawless.

If nature has created it then there are...

Flaws.

These flaws are just a part of the gem.

They are an important part.

No one's perfect,

and nothing you do will ever be perfect.

Just think of yourself as a precious gem,

Your flaws make you real,

Not something produced in a factory.

© 2008 Meradee


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Haha, Pepper no one could have said it any better than you! Really!

"If it was made in a factory then the gem is...
Flawless.
If nature has created it then there are...
Flaws.
These flaws are just a part of the gem.
They are an important part.
No one's perfect,
and nothing you do will ever be perfect.
Just think of yourself as a precious gem,
Your flaws make you real,
Not something produced in a factory."

The exact same words that helped me realize that my writing will always have flaws, it cannot be perfected.... It's nothing but real. :) Thanks a ton!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Your mention of the Hope Diamond in this piece seems to stand out somehow. Every reader can learn something from the well composed message this piece conveys. What an amazing manner in which you have chosen to share this idea. This is brilliant, beautiful and with an ironic twist, flawless. This is a Cloak and Dagger piece through and through. A gauranteed Feature write.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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