No goodbye is needed

No goodbye is needed

A Poem by Enigma
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Let's be a part of a boy's mind and live his story through this one simple moment of struggle.

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Pushed to the darkness,
losing my senses
She's sucking my lips,
lost my defenses
She tugs my shirt,
I push her to the dirt
I start to leave,
She grabs my wrist
I pill her waist
Pinned to the wall, she screams
I say his name
She struggles, she fights
I hold her in place,
She stares into space
I bite her ear
I see her tear
I love him I say,
I left, no goodbye.

© 2014 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
I hope you forgive any grammar errors, I tried to put myself in the mind of a character that I created and wrote a lot about (which I'll post soon) and live a scene with him in present moment by moment until he leaves, he is a boy who fell in love with another boy, this scene is somehow from the future because we still don't know how he came to love that boy..

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The great thing about poetry is there can't be punctuation errors because it is an expression of thought therefore, you get to decide where to add emphasis. Interesting piece though, will definitely have to read the rest to get a better sense of the character. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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The great thing about poetry is there can't be punctuation errors because it is an expression of thought therefore, you get to decide where to add emphasis. Interesting piece though, will definitely have to read the rest to get a better sense of the character. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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