No goodbye is needed

Let's be a part of a boy's mind and live his story through this one simple moment of struggle.

Pushed to the darkness,

losing my senses

She's sucking my lips,

lost my defenses

She tugs my shirt,

I push her to the dirt

I start to leave,

She grabs my wrist

I pill her waist

Pinned to the wall, she screams

I say his name

She struggles, she fights

I hold her in place,

She stares into space

I bite her ear

I see her tear

I love him I say,

I left, no goodbye.

Author's Note

I hope you forgive any grammar errors, I tried to put myself in the mind of a character that I created and wrote a lot about (which I'll post soon) and live a scene with him in present moment by moment until he leaves, he is a boy who fell in love with another boy, this scene is somehow from the future because we still don't know how he came to love that boy..

Reviews

[Stephanie K.]

The great thing about poetry is there can't be punctuation errors because it is an expression of thought therefore, you get to decide where to add emphasis. Interesting piece though, will definitely have to read the rest to get a better sense of the character. :)