The illusion of a masked man

The illusion of a masked man

A Story by Enigma

   
        A bridge, a river, people and a masked man. He looked suspicious yet you feel comfortable standing next to him thought a cute girl while starting to get closer to him, he was like a magnet drawing her closer and closer until there were barely three centimeters between them as she stood by his side.
The man tilted his head to the side looking in her eyes, she smiled. Those eyes; she saw them before she can swear it but no she can't remember where. He smiled, pulled her closer and to her surprise she let him, she was nervous, he chuckled, she froze, he winked, she cried,they are face to face now, he kissed the top of her head, she bit her lip hard, he looked her in the eye, she looked back. She wasn't supposed to look back.
The man stepped backward, she frowned, his hand shook, she saw it, he hid it in his pocket, she stepped forward, he cried,a single tear rolled down his cheek, the river froze, the bridge cracked and the people disappeared.
The man looked at her, she smiled, he smiled back and she just stood there. He was scared, she was feeling blank, he stepped toward her and she chuckled, he hugged her; no warmth.
The girl in his arms get closer to his ear and whispered, he shivered, " let me go" she said, " I already did" he replied, words choking in his throat, "If you did then why are we here?" she cried, he cried and broke the hug.
A bridge, a river, he is alone.

© 2014 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
Hello this is my first time posting any kind of my writings anywhere so please give me your opinion about this and I will appreciate corrections and any type of critical and I really hope you can help identify the genre of what I wrote for I don't really know. Thank you so much :)

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