Fairy tale pt 2

Fairy tale pt 2

A Poem by Sarmelendez
"

its not over yet

"
Clock strikes 12 
magic gone yet
love is there

butterflies in her
stomach flutter 
he picks her up 

hold her close 
promises to treat 
her the way she 
has always wanted 

down on bended knee 
he goes and gives 
her the promise 
of a life time 

© 2013 Sarmelendez


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This is beautiful.... true love is an amazing thing :) Very romantic sweet heartfelt write :) Well written i enjoyed that :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nice Sarah. Some lovely words spoken here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sweet poem. I really like the sentiment here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

10 Years Ago

Thank you for review i am glad that you liked it
Sounds like this lady got what she needed....



Enjoyed the read

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed the reading
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott....
Love it where is part 3?!?!?!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 28, 2013
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Sarmelendez
Sarmelendez

Joplin, MO



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