Fairy tale pt 2
A Poem by Sarmelendez
its not over yet
Clock strikes 12 magic gone yet love is there
butterflies in her stomach flutter he picks her up
hold her close promises to treat her the way she has always wanted
down on bended knee he goes and gives her the promise of a life time
© 2013 Sarmelendez
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This is beautiful.... true love is an amazing thing :) Very romantic sweet heartfelt write :) Well written i enjoyed that :)
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Very nice Sarah. Some lovely words spoken here.
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Sweet poem. I really like the sentiment here.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for review i am glad that you liked it
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Sounds like this lady got what she needed....
Enjoyed the read
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed the reading
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10 Years Ago
:)
Scott....
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Love it where is part 3?!?!?!
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Added on December 28, 2013
Last Updated on December 28, 2013
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SarmelendezJoplin, MO
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I am just a person that tries to put the way i see things into words that are not the right word that are the raw words
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