Secrets

Secrets

A Poem by Sarmelendez
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hiding is never good

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How can i trust you? 
you wont say it and yet i feel it
You cant hide behind it anymore

You cant tell me a lie 
i cant build a relationship 
based on secrets and lie

I want you to let me in
You want to let me in right? 
dont push me way you need me

I need someone like you
someone who understands me
you need someone who understands
you..

© 2013 Sarmelendez


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Sarah I enjoyed reading your poetry is always soft and sweet with beautiful message in it, always romantic and interesting....

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I need someone like you
someone who understands me
you need someone who understands
you..

Loved this part. It is what most of us want.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

10 Years Ago

thank you i am glad that you like it. please feel free to read more
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10 Years Ago

You are most welcome. I will.
This is a moving poem. It beautifully expresses our need for each other - our need to understand and be understood. I really enjoyed reading this poem! It came straight from your heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

thank you i am glad you liked this
Calissa Knox

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, Sarah. :)

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Added on November 19, 2013
Last Updated on November 19, 2013
Tags: secrets, lies, truth, trust

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Sarmelendez
Sarmelendez

Joplin, MO



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I am just a person that tries to put the way i see things into words that are not the right word that are the raw words more..

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