Real or fake

just not sure its real

How can you be so good 

yet be so bad for me? 

I told my self never again

but yet i fell back into it

You say all the right thing

my heart says just jump

my head says eyes open.

what can i do? 

I cant let my self

hurt like before you.

I wont let you break 

me down like he did.

I know your not him

your you your different

yet the same in ways 

i cant yet explain it. 

Can i trust you? 

Can i trust my self to trust you? 

Can you trust me? 

Can you allow your self to feel 

what i feel? 

Reviews

[Calissa Knox]

I could really feel the emotion in this poem. It's hard to trust again, after someone has let you down. This poem portrays the past hurt, and fear, yet it shows hope for a new beginning. This is a beautifully written piece.

[Sarmelendez]

thank you so much i am glad you liked it.. feel free to read more please

[Calissa Knox]

You're welcome, Sarah! I'll definitely read more, and I'm excited to read the new stuff you'll create. :)

[Sami Khalil]

This was wonderful . I like the repetition to give it added emphasis...Thank you for penning this emotive poem...:).................

[Sarmelendez]

Thank you for reading it. I am glad that you enjoyed this

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:)................

[Brittany weddle]

Sarah, this is really good! Good for you for beating writers block!

[Sarmelendez]

i am just happy i beat it, and thanks brittany

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This about anyone in particular hun or?
I could feel your heart speaking in this poem, so much emotion and un answered questions in this poem,
It tells quite a story.
Its hard to just give your heart away i know, you have to be careful to give it to the right man, because heartbreak really hurts no one wants there heart broken.
Great write hun i enjoyed reading it :)

[Sarmelendez]

I am not sure yet, to be honest it just came to me and i have for some reason i write based on emotions.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

its easiest to write based on your own emotions, most of my writing is based on how im felling to :)