thunder

watching a storm

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thunder roars echo

heart races faster

Lighting strikes

senses heightened

 

The noise of the rain

calms nerves

breathing slows

the wind howls echo

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

I do love a good thunderstorm and rain fall.

Not so happy with the howling winds though.

A very descriptive short piece Sarah. Well done.
Regards
Troy

[Calissa Knox]

Your words painted a spectacular picture. In my mind, I could see the lightning, hear the noise of the rain, and feel the thunder. This is a beautiful piece of writing!

[Sarmelendez]

thank you i am glad that you felt the emotions behind this

[Calissa Knox]

You're welcome. :) The emotions are very strong in this piece, and I love it.

[Bare Trees]

A nice summation of the feelings in a storm.

[Sarmelendez]

glad you liked it

[Sami Khalil]

Another great write. This time it thunders in our ears...Splendid...:)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you for the review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...............:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :>)................

[Luke L]

Lovely emotional write, beautiful stuff :)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you for the review :)