fairy tale

fairy tale

A Poem by Sarmelendez

 Everyone awaits your arrival 
Stunning gown perfect smile
doors open everyone in aww

glides down the stairs
he awaits at the bottom
smiles and takes your hand 

the song you wished for plays
takes you and twirls you 
everyone disappears 

your captive to him 
he captive to her
is it meant to be

song stopped playing 
he escorts you off the floor 
he kisses you under the stars

© 2013 Sarmelendez


Author's Note

Sarmelendez
This was a first and last

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Ah, those fairytales; they know it's never gonna happen, but of course, there's no restriction on one's imagination, is there. Nicely written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Beautiful fair tale poem. Loved how it starts. Would love to see you expand on this, maybe a different poem for each moment.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

10 Years Ago

Thanks, But it was a first and last.
ron

10 Years Ago

I understand. Well you finished it at just the right moment, well done.
Fairytales are alive and well Sarah.
Nice write:)

Regards
Troy

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

10 Years Ago

thank you glad you like it
aw lovely poem :) really nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i reread over it and i still love it very sweet and romantic this one.
I just doesnt sound like it should end like that, the ending doesn't sound like an ending.
I love the whole story line to it its beautiful.
Keep writing hun :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Every Girl loves a fairy Tale, good work Sarah.
Will

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

thank you for the review
So cute, you are just a little girl at heart I suppose :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

thank you and what girl is not as some point
Luke L

11 Years Ago

I dunno hard to say :p
Awwww.. what a perfect poem :D
Wonderfully narrated Sarah Bravo!

Cheers!
Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

thank you so much
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
very romantic and sweet write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

thank you i am glad you liked it

cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Years Ago

your most welcome anytime :)
I really love this one and somehow it reminds me of Cinderella.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

noel told me its like a messed up version of Cinderella lol.... I am glad that you liked this one

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Sarmelendez
Sarmelendez

Joplin, MO



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