fairy tale

 Everyone awaits your arrival 

Stunning gown perfect smile

doors open everyone in aww

glides down the stairs

he awaits at the bottom

smiles and takes your hand 

the song you wished for plays

takes you and twirls you 

everyone disappears 

your captive to him 

he captive to her

is it meant to be

song stopped playing 

he escorts you off the floor 

he kisses you under the stars

Author's Note

This was a first and last

Reviews

[Zoya]

Ah, those fairytales; they know it's never gonna happen, but of course, there's no restriction on one's imagination, is there. Nicely written!

[ron]

Beautiful fair tale poem. Loved how it starts. Would love to see you expand on this, maybe a different poem for each moment.

[Sarmelendez]

Thanks, But it was a first and last.

[ron]

I understand. Well you finished it at just the right moment, well done.

[Troy Henson]

Fairytales are alive and well Sarah.
Nice write:)

Regards
Troy

[Sarmelendez]

thank you glad you like it

[Mizo4]

aw lovely poem :) really nice write.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i reread over it and i still love it very sweet and romantic this one.
I just doesnt sound like it should end like that, the ending doesn't sound like an ending.
I love the whole story line to it its beautiful.
Keep writing hun :)

[Will Neill]

Every Girl loves a fairy Tale, good work Sarah.
Will

[Sarmelendez]

thank you for the review

[Luke L]

So cute, you are just a little girl at heart I suppose :)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you and what girl is not as some point

[Luke L]

I dunno hard to say :p

[Vikrantsingh]

Awwww.. what a perfect poem :D
Wonderfully narrated Sarah Bravo!

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you so much

[Vikrantsingh]

You're welcome :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

very romantic and sweet write :)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you i am glad you liked it

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome anytime :)

[Brittany weddle]

I really love this one and somehow it reminds me of Cinderella.

[Sarmelendez]

noel told me its like a messed up version of Cinderella lol.... I am glad that you liked this one