Invisible

there was once a time you never look away

captive to my nature, fell hard and fast

You held my heart and i held yours 

We trusted each other once 

the siren song fell apart 

hard and fast 

we were strangers once again

said few words, exchanged no looks

I felt invisible when i was next to you 

I was no longer the sight you wanted 

few calls left me hurt 

few text lost my heart

You now come back hoping to capture me

my heart no longer sings your song

yet you still try to play the song 

we are romeo and Juliet 

Author's Note

wrote this in 5 mins sorry for the spelling errors

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

touching romantic and so full of emotion, has such a great story line to it :)
my favorite part was the end paragraph.
well written heart breaking little story like poem.

[Sarmelendez]

thank you. i am glad that you like this one.. I cant wait to read some of your writing

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

ur most welcome. I hope you like my writing i have quite a bit :) if you want to read something would you mind reading a chapter of my book no one really reviews that. Please and thank u

[Sarmelendez]

i would love to read that

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks i would much appreciate
it :)

[Shaun Payton]

That opening drew me into this read. For five minutes this is great work. The strangeness of seeing a ex and not even acknowledging each other, the one plays the song again but who is listening after the heart.

[Sarmelendez]

I am glad that it drew you in

[Vikrantsingh]

Heart touching Sarah :)

Loved this lines which are way sensible and touchy

I felt invisible when i was next to you
I was no longer the sight you wanted
few calls left me hurt
few text lost my heart

Loved your poem :)
Singh :)

[Sarmelendez]

thanks

[MOON]

Lovely heartfelt write!

[Sarmelendez]

thanks

[Sami Khalil]

"there was once a time you never look away
captive to my nature, fell hard and fast

You held my heart and i held yours

We trusted each other once"
Those lines drew me in to a great treat of poetry . Well penned ...:)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you so much.. I so glad that you like it

[Easy Qualify Money]

I agree...those choice of words are the... ambiance of the story

[Sarmelendez]

thank you so much. i hope you read more of my writings

[Sami Khalil]

I do and I will. My pleasure...:)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you cant wait to read more of yours

[Sami Khalil]

Feel free. At you leisure...:)