A Broken hearted Girl

A Broken hearted Girl

A Poem by Sarmelendez

She wears a mask to hide the pain
No see she torn apart
she holds her broken heart in her hands
The tears she cries for the one she lost 
the quite echos with every breath
one touch is all she remember 
the words whispered before he left
"always and forever" 
those words no longer hold meaning
she cries for the girl who she locked away
she pretends to be over it
but in all truth she wants to have him 
He wants her.. forever and always
she want to have him for truth and love

© 2013 Sarmelendez


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very heartfelt, touching and emotion.
Poems always make for the best poems, when the reader can feel the emotions through the poem, this poem does just that.
I enjoyed this read very romantic yet emotional, heartbreaking write......
Great poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I am glad that you can feel the emotion in this.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Years Ago

your welcome anytime :)
Sarah, A broken hearted girl.
I must say much heartfelt and so touchy. You are able to describe your poem with art of broken hearted girl throughout very well.

Loved you composition and art of expression.

God Bless.
Singh :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

thank you.
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Welcome dear
You have touched on the broken heart elements with great detail and skill. A very good read ...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

thank you. I just write raw and real emotion or what i see and feel
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

God to know. Good way to go...:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)

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Added on April 22, 2013
Last Updated on April 22, 2013
Tags: love, happiness, sadness

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Sarmelendez
Sarmelendez

Joplin, MO



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I am just a person that tries to put the way i see things into words that are not the right word that are the raw words more..

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