Broken

heartbroken

 NOW GO STAND IN THE CORNER AND THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU DID

One tear falls from the face of a girl 

who can no longer hide her broken heart

so few good memories just as many she wants to forget.

she feels like she is missing a part of who she is, she 

wears a mask to to mask the pain and sadness she feels 

she pretends like it never happened like it was all a 

bad dream.. yet in her dream she still had the one to call hers.

Yet she always knew the one that she called "hers" was never really 

going to be just hers

Reviews

[tuvi]

i just loved this part " like it was all a
bad dream.. yet in her dream she still had the one to call hers.
Yet she always knew the one that she called "hers" was never really
going to be just hers " ...... the feelings are penned in a very precise and beautiful manner :)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you so much

[tuvi]

your welcome hun!

[Sami Khalil]

"she pretends like it never happened like it was all a

bad dream.. yet in her dream she still had the one to call hers."
This is some good poetry...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Sarmelendez]

thanks for reading it i am so glad you like it

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:0

[Brittany weddle]

Keep up the good work:)

[Sarmelendez]

thanks

[Jeff]

Very well written.

[Sarmelendez]

thank you

[Sarmelendez]

thank you so much

[Ency Bearis]

my pleasure, you're welcome

[Ency Bearis]

a poignant notion, well expressed and versed