Last

Hurting

One more Kiss 

One last I LOVE YOU 
One more hug 

before i take the blade 

to my wrist 

as you walk away i cut into my skin 

the pain beyond bearable as 

i see you walk away 

you don't look back as i scream 

for you to stop me but you don't

you walk away and don't look back 

to see the pain that you have caused me 

Author's Note

Raw

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im so sorry if this was about you.
Very as you say Raw poem, very emotional....
I could feel the pain through out the poem.
Well written and straight from the heart.

[Sarmelendez]

thanks you. I wrote it the first time I got my heart broken but now I have some who treats me better in so many ways

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

that's great so happy for you hun congrats :)

[tuvi]

poem is simple but its the crude reality of the world ....
but its silly to be honest to blade oneself for the heck of someone Else's fault and fallacies !!

[Sarmelendez]

thank for the review

[Sami Khalil]

"you walk away and don't look back
to see the pain that you have caused me "
I really like those lines among this nice poem...Very sad...:)

[Sarmelendez]

thanks i had just had my heart broken and that is what i felt.

[Sami Khalil]

I'm sorry to hear that... I hope things work out for the better...:)

[Sarmelendez]

i wrote it awhile go and just posted it i am all better now

[Sami Khalil]

Good news. Happy writing...:)

[Sarmelendez]

same to you

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)