From 10 to 1

From 10 to 1

A Poem by Sarmelendez
"

Be honest and say what you think

"
 count down from 10..
your face haunts my dreams
Take a breath at 9.. 
why wont you let me go? 
Close your eyes at 8..
you broke my heart why? 
Keep a steady breath at 7..
a part of me still wants you
Relax your hands on 6.. 
why did you fall in love with me? 
Tell me what I want to hear on 5..
he has my heart and wont let go..
Come back to me on 4.. 
are you ready to let me go? 
Take a slow breath on 3..
let go of my heart so i can go
Open your eyes on 2..
cant...see his face.. only
Tell me what your heart desires on 1.. 
I want him to let me go

© 2013 Sarmelendez


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Sarmelendez
I want to see what you think

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A most unique write using counting hours...Well penned...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sarmelendez

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

MY pleasure...:)
I love this one

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 18, 2013
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Sarmelendez
Sarmelendez

Joplin, MO



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