I found love
A Book by Little sunshine
 Jenna is a girl who is a teenager who don't have any feelings for any boy tries to know who is her real love .  © 2021 Little sunshine
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This is my first writing if there is any mistakes i think you guys can help me out
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Hello, I like your story. I think it will be a good story about love and relationship. Even the hero and heroine attend a fake marriage without any love, I believe they will fall in love with each other at the end. You write a very surprising beginning, which attracts me a lot. And you also have a good control of the story pace. But I think if you seperate the dailogue in row by row, that will be better for us to read and figure out who is speaking. It's just a pensonal suggestion. Cheer on! You have a talent in writing.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you jane. I will surely make that in consideration
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Added on May 19, 2021
Last Updated on May 19, 2021
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