Chapter 2-Sweet Goodbyes-horrible endings

Chapter 2-Sweet Goodbyes-horrible endings

A Chapter by SecretWriter
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Lizzie goes to say goodbye to the one guy who really Knocked her up after saying goodbye to her best friend and brother she now has to choose stay and watch as he loves someone or Move away? Move away

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"Thats why Emily is scared about you leaving her." I started
"And why Lizzie is leaving so Ricky doesn't find out." Josh sighed
"Sis, you gotta tell Ricky."
"NO! I mean I don't want to trap him into a relationship where only one person loves." I looked down "I love Ricky"
"OH! Sweetie! I didn't know!" Emily hugged me
"No one did only I did." I weakly smiled
"How far along are you?" Josh mumured
"Well I'm 3 months and 3 days Lizzie is 3 months even." Emily smiled at Josh
" I promise you I'm not leaving you I'll be back in 4 months instead of 6 I will not miss the birth of our first child. Lizzie?" I looked at him "You tell Ricky or I will." I shook my head
"I'm leaving so it doesn't matter but please don't tell him." Josh just looked at me and hugged Emily close.
"I have to go now and say goodbye to Ricky." I got into the car and drove to the dock dreading this.
"You made it!!!! I'm so glad! I need to talk to you."
"Ricky no, I'm just here to say goodbye." I look away
"No Lizzie look at me and listen," I look at him "I'll be gone for 6 months." I grimace "When I come back I will marry you."
"No, Josh told you didn't he! He told you I was f*****g pregnant! Didn't he!"
"YOUR WHAT!!!" Ricky yelled "How far?"
"3 months" I whisper
"Your not leaving go back and stay with Emily, I'll come home with Josh in 4 months." I kissed him
"Goodbye Ricky. I love you." I walked off to my car heading to Colorado

"Elizabeth Marie Johnson! Where the hell are you!" I sighed as Emily screams more
"Well Emily May Johnson! I'm in Denver ready to go into Colorado Springs." Emily screeched
"YOUR SUPPOSE TO BE HERE! OHHHH! I'm telling Ricky!" She hung up
"Go ahead your not gonna find me!"
"Lizzie Kelly James this is your new life now." I rub my belly lightly "how about that? A new life with mommy?" My phone rings
"Hello?"
"Lizzie Johnson?" Josh's commander asks
"No sorry its Lizzie James how can I help you?"
"Hang up and answer the phone is 15 minutes please."
"NO!" I yelled but the dial ton just answered me back
"F**K!" I yelled again as I pulled in to my  new drive way
My phone rang again
"Hello?" 
"Lizzie?' I sighed
"Hi Ricky"
"Why did you leave! You were suppose to stay with Emily!"
"You don't own me Ricky."
"I know Lizzie but our child is growing inside of you and I want you safe!I'm coming out to Denver."
"Emily?" i ask
"Emily." He stated DAMN HER! OH WAIT GOD DON'T JUST YA KNOW MAKE HER UP HAPPY! DON'T DAMN HER
"When will I see you?" I ask then I heard the door knock
"Hold on Ricky someones at the door." I open the door and there stood the love of my life





Ricky


© 2011 SecretWriter


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I have to say, that you might want more details about the beginning. I know a lot of people who just plays it out as characters talk to one another but you have to add description to your writing. How does your people look like? What do they feel as someone speaks back? Think inside the box. Other than that, I really enjoyed it to begin with.

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I love it!!! So good and romantic!!! Let me know when youve written more!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes im happy can't wait for a new chapter

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have to say, that you might want more details about the beginning. I know a lot of people who just plays it out as characters talk to one another but you have to add description to your writing. How does your people look like? What do they feel as someone speaks back? Think inside the box. Other than that, I really enjoyed it to begin with.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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