Wanting What You Can't Have

Wanting What You Can't Have

A Story by Lil Guppy

The wind was blowing as the sun was ending its journey. The time was now or never. She gathered up her skirts and started towards the lake. What was awaiting her at the lake was none other than him. He was splayed in the grass without a care in the world. 

I wish I could be like that she thought. Without hesitation she went to him. 

"I knew you would come for me," he whispered. 

She knew she had to do this; and do it she did. "Will you answer my question this time?"  

"Yes, indeed. Your answer is no. Before you-" 

Without any hesitation, she slapped him in his face. Crying, she questioned him, "Why?! Why won't you admit you love me and I love you?! It is very simple!" 

He slowly got to his knees and spoke what was on his mind. "Darn you woman! I do love you! I could never fool you, my only love. My answer will remain the same, for I cannot give you what you need. I am only a man with little pay and a big heart. No woman should want a man like me." 

Angered, she hit him again, and again, and again. "Why must you think that way?! I love only you! It doesn't matter to me whether you have money or not!"

They remained like that until the stars were bright in the night sky. He loved her. She loved him. They wanted what was forbidden. They both knew that they'd die with longing in their heart. And die is what they did. 

The fading light is us, and we are, for a moment so brief (...) beautiful.” 
― Gary ShteyngartSuper Sad True Love Story

© 2018 Lil Guppy


Author's Note

Lil Guppy
Sometimes love hurts. It hurts more though, when you can't express that love.

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This isn't the best of my writing :/

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. Nice story, but short... A few errors, but otherwise good. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I noticed some wrong words but I won't point it out yet. Just PM me if you want to. Anyways, this is great and well-written. Still, you need to expand this a bit. If you published a new version please send me an RR (:


Posted 11 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

Sure, and thanks for considering my bluntness.

(1) They both new- new to knew
(2.. read more
Lil Guppy

11 Years Ago

:D
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

(:

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Added on April 25, 2013
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