A Dying Wish

When the curtains go down where do you go?

There is no Savior coming to rescue me.

There's no where to turn or run.

All that's left for me to do is wait for the darkness to consume all of me.

I just want to be free.

Can anyone grant me that single wish?

All I ever do is wander aimlessly through my own personal hell.

Suffering day in and day out just to find an escape.

Please save me from myself or I too will become a lost soul.

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I don't want to open this up if it won't possibly help but I think the one that can help the narrator is God who always moves in mysterious ways.
He can always held out His hand for us to reach

[David the writer]

Good, good. But when you write poetry, you're suppose to use stanzas.

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See the lines? Fill those blanks with words, and you have stanzas. Besides that, it was pretty good.