CheeseBurgers Are My Paradise

when i was a kid my dad, well i should say step dad, but it never felt like he was my step dad, when i was a kid, we would ride around in his gray truck and he always played cheeseburger in paradise.

My troubles will melt away like cheese on a grill

I'll find my peace in a sesame seed bun still

I'll savor each bite, oh so divine

My worries will fade with the setting sun's shine

In this cheesy utopia, I'll be just fine

With a side of crispy fries and a cold pop to make me grin

And wash all my worries away

Cause the sun will go down and we'll watch the stars laying on the beach

With the sound of the waves and the breeze on our skin

As I sink into this paradise, where cheeseburgers fill the air

I'll find my heart at peace, without a single care

So that when life does gets me down, I'll just sing to cheeseburgers for that's my paradise!

Author's Note

i love getting feed back on my work :) what was your favorite part of the poem and what did you think?

Reviews

[Pete]

who doesn't love one, right? cool poem. great choice of metaphor. made me think of the song. well done.
i'll take one to go.

[Amy Pettit]

It is inspired from the song. Lol :) and thank you for the review :)

[LisaCarol]

Hi Amy - Loved this poem. I’m a big fan of Jimmy Buffett too. Your poem paid wonderful homage to this classic song and his memory. Thank you for sharing your writing.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Ahh, a cheeseburger IS paradise! Love the song, AND the burger, partnered with fries and a vanilla milkshake! I've a feeling Jimmy Buffet would love it, too. Nice to meet you, Amy!

[Amy Pettit]

thank you so much kelly! this means alot to me that you say that :) your to kind

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not to sound rude or anything but, what does that hve to do with my poem?