that night

that night

A Story by Zana
"

this is an short story that i guess can be continue

"

I see only darkness and can only hear my own breath. I touch my forehead and feel my blood  running down my face. Now all i can hear is the tap tap tap of my blood hitting the floor. There's no one around. After i gain my sight i can see im by an bar. In big bold letters that flash so fast "Bill's chills." i don't remeber how i got here and what am doing outside an bar for there im only 12 years old. i heared an creak of the door it was an dirty old man thats smells like liquor and wet dog. He came out of the bar tripping over his  own feet and cursing like crazy at the empty wind. Finally he fall by an trash can and fell asleep. i got up slowly and fell back down. i look at my legs and......................  

© 2010 Zana


My Review

Would you like to review this Story?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

217 Views
Added on April 23, 2010
Last Updated on April 23, 2010

Author

Zana
Zana

Lehigh , FL



About
My name is Zana Reyes. GODDAMN ive havnt even ben on diz n a gudd min. . . .wow well anywayz i myt come on sumtymz. . . .n woooow:D!!! i cnt believe i still remember da passwrd: 0000 more..

Writing
Pain Pain

A Poem by Zana


My feelings My feelings

A Poem by Zana