Cry

Crying inside

crying outside

for what my dad put me through

pain for my mom

the physical pain

the scars

the blood

the pictures in my mind

horrible pictures

will he ever learn?

he's hurting us

running us away

losing his family

losing his mind

stop

think

see what your doing

hurting the ones you love

Reviews

[Midnight Mortem]

Wow, this is a really powerful piece. And it takes real guts to post something so personal 'out there' for the whole world to see and comment on. You can tell that it was written in the heat of the moment, but that just adds to the power of it. I'd say I love it, but it sort of seems like the wrong thing to say...I hope things get easier, though.

[[KL]]

im liking this.. mainly because it takes nerve to post something like this on view to just about anyone... well.. in my opinion it is.. so thats a brave thing to do.. its a good poem too.. a very interesting piece to say the least (:

[Zana]

i was cring and i had an pencil and paper so i wrote this poem......to tell you the truth it's an true poem....no lie

[Vin]

This was a very powerful write that clearly portrays raw emotion, I really love this! Well done, and thanks for sharing :)

-Beth