I love you.....

The moon shines bright,

A song so sweet

A wolf that howls

On a swift heart beat 

 

A one that loves

A heart that is true

A swift flowing river

With a chant

 

"I love you..."

 

A grand love

A heart of gold

The brave

and the bold

 

A song so sweet,

A story that is true

A wolf's howl

Saying

 

"I love you..."

 

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"A swift flowling river"...you might want to remove that second "l" there. This was a nice simple poem with a sweet sentiment.

[Kitty Nyght]

Thanks guys, I really think that I did an 'ok job'. It isn't my best though....Thanks for the comments.

[Desert Dreamer]

I like the image of nature, in the form of a river and a wolf, saying "I love you". We are all part of nature.

[Ima]

A song so sweet,
A story that is true
A wolf's howl
Saying

"I love you..."


amazing just amazing !!!