Of Beauty

To my sis

In fields of gold, so faraway
Along the hills and vales
Where sleep comes easy
Dreams come too
Under the distant stars

You're there,
Awake in a world where dreamers choose to sleep
Your life has seen realities, far more then most will ever

Night came to the valley
A strong and pressing rain
Eclipsed a clear blue sky
As your eyes fall downcast
A girl, numbed by cold
Somehow lost in time






Towers are
Built for battle
And your fortress is of stone

Love,
Frozen in time
Captive to thoughts and fears

Till the summer winds come
And a melting ice palace
Reveals your reflection in a shining pool

And you see that you are not alone
You are a child of the most High King
And His avenging of the innocent
Will shatter the world of darkness





































Your soul, is a beacon to the world
Your thoughts, a royal palace

And your spirit,
Of dancing colors beyond this world
It lives outside of time

Along the roads of freedom
Where sunset’s chasing gleam
Catches your face
Touches your smile
You feel alive
And free































For life in God's eternal sunrise
Is beauty

And the pathways lit by Faith and Hope
In His eternal love for YOU
Will find you there

Awakening free

Reviews

[Joshua Donahue]

such detail and beauty! im amazed and captivated by this! EXCELLENT JOB!

P.S.: the pictures had a nice effect on the poem's ability to portray such beauty. :)

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'And the pathways lit by Faith and Hope
In His eternal love for YOU
Will find you there

Awakening free"

Gorgeous Poem!!!

james:-)

[Snow412]

"And your spirit,
Of dancing colors beyond this world
It lives outside of time"----Favorite part.

The whole write was beautiful, as usual. Was kinda sad too, but still very vibrantly written.

I cannot do this any justice by rambling. :P

Great job though!

[J.S. Pua]

amazing write..
last 6 lines..
definitely my favorite..
a well written piece..
great work..

[Martina]

wow amazing :) Its well written, and good word choice, and adding the pictures is a good idea to shown the poem effect. Well done, I like it :) I'll rate this work- 100/100 and adding it to my favoites. ^_^