Just Another One.....

Just Another One.....

A Poem by Maggie waz here =p

This is gonna feel like another stupid poem about you and how amazing you are......

It pobably won't be of any importance to you.....

 

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Every time I look at you...... I notice your eyes.

I always hope you'll look at me one day.......

Then I notice you'll always be looking at a prettier girl.

 

Every time I look at you..... I notice your smile.

I always hope you're thinking about me.......

Then I notice you'll be kissing another girl.

 

Every time I look at you..... I notice your hair.

I hope that one day, you'll fix it because of a date, with me.......

Then I realize, you'll be fixing it for another girl, on the date with her.

 

I'll just keep hoping.

Even though .... the day will never come.

I guess some things aren't ment to be.......

 

 

© 2009 Maggie waz here =p


Author's Note

Maggie waz here =p
I know I mde a bunch of mistakes. If you could tell me hoe to correct them, that would be nice.
Thanks! =)

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this is...amazing! I love it! It's really good. you're a really good writer. I can really relate to this, or at least I used to b able to relate to it, until the boy i loved left over the summer. but i can still kinda relate to it. Great job!! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Maggie waz here =p
Maggie waz here =p

you're a garcogogal if you need to know. TEE- HEE!, LA



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I like sports, playing sports, music, playing music, and pizza. I'm 11 and female. Live in Louisiana. Love to write. And I'm awesome. I like to make friends, and will always be your friend. PEAC.. more..

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