Why Am I Feeling Like This?

Why Am I Feeling Like This?

A Poem by Dark Poetry
"

It all happened suddenly...

"

We have sudden instincts...

Happiness...

Sadness...

These doesn't fail to make us cry...

Our emotions is always unexpected

Our mouth speaks unexpected

I myself experienced this

Yesterday,

We drove

Hours

To the beach

When we got there

I saw

The sun flickering from the water

The water

A perfect mirror

White sand

The deep silent

of the gentle waves....

Crashing gently

And then suddenly

I whispered...

"I'm home"....

Is it my heart

Whispering...  

 

 

 

       

© 2012 Dark Poetry


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Though your words always seem random, they always come into such sweet ends and great words for realization. I can't just explain it but you do have a way with words. I love everything about it and you sure gave your heart into everything.

*Ahm, I think you misspelled "perfect". I think you only used it once so it won't be hard to find. :) As for everything else, you did great and fine. ;) Keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Dark Poetry
Dark Poetry

I'm from a hidden place, where a paradise lies in front of me and with me is a special friend. . ., Hidden from all people who can't understand art, Philippines



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