The Rest of My Life ?

Sometimes we get bored and wonder what are we gonna do for the rest of our lives.

Our hopes

         dreams

           shatters 

             in one selfish decision

 

                                       We desperately

                                                  strive to find our mate

                                                         but first think of all of you

                                                                so why do we bother of finding one?

                                         

                                                                 We all have angelic and devilish traits

                                                                              Helpful                Sloth

                                                       Open-hearted                                 Anger

                                    Thoughtful                                                              Gluttony

                             Fair                                                                                     Greed

                  Good                                                                                                    Lust

  Then you have Salvation                                                                                          Pride

                                                                                                                Then die and rot

We should all understand 

That we were created with

Challenges 

And we should live for the rest of our lives

Living who we are

Author's Note

It's my daily thought: What am I gonna do with my life?

Reviews

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I liek how you used the seven sins! :D And wrote it into two seperate directons :D Excellent poem!!!!

[Amata Luna]

A very good style of writing there. You simply showed little realities of life. True and sincerely written; right from the heart. Thank you for this one.

[samantha munning]

i liked it a lot. very well writen :)

[quarintine_deathangel]

Nice idea, cool how you split the words and made an image out of their facade, it was enjoyable to read.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the thoughts of our duality in this piece. We all have positive and negative traits. Being the best person we can be is all we can do. Salvation is a great line in this poem. Strong and true piece.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very interesting. I like the idea of the text formatting; adds visual interest. Great write!