Don't leave me

It seems that they left,

All haters

All sinners,

All betrayers,

Their smiles,

Seem so real,

Their voice,

Full of contentment,

All the black Sheep,

Had gone berserk,

All the white Sheep,

Unifies with our Shepard,

Being one of the white Sheep,

Being with my Shepard,

Had always prevented me,

To scream: don't leave me.

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

Surely you have a way with words. I like the way you presented your faith in here and I like the last stanza the most. Keep doing good. Keep up the best of your work. :)

[koi zaire]

nice job. you say a lot using so very few words

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a deep poem about faith and our travels within our faith and this world. There are not so great things in this world and ugly words that get spilled from peoples decaying mouths from time to time. We all venture off course but trying to keep on course is the main objective being true to who we are and loving those who matter most.