Fucked Up

Story of people who fought in wars.

He was on the battlefield, with all comrades down
He continued to shoot, killing all the enemies
The ammo's in his gun are rapidly falling
And out splatter the blood of his enemies

He ran as fast as he could, and kill the enemies that blocks his way
He held out a picture, showing him and a women
Then slid it to his chest pocket, and ran furiously on the bloody field
And fiercely shouted: die all of you!!!

In a matter of seconds, he heard an explosion beside him
His hearing went off
He can't feel the right side of his body
Blood splatter all over his body

Seeing the brightest light he had never saw in his life
Knowing it was his end, He took out the picture
With tears and blood in his cheeks
Knowing he fought honorably for his beloved wife
He said: I'm so sorry, I fucked up. . .

Reviews

[xyz]

sadness

[rjrodriguez]

when he died, it almost brought tears to my eyes. he died, yes. but he did not fail.

[dontwakeme]

Wow. This is...deep. I especially love the very last part when he looks at the picture before death... so touching.