Chasing

Funny thing, I don't even remember writing this. Probably written on one of those drunken nights. God knows for how long I've had this without any knowledge of it's existence.

Come closer

I just need to lean on someone

I'm tired

I really thought that I was stronger

And I'm chasing 

The traces of scent that I pick up

But it's fainting

And I feel so lost.

You slap me with your paradise

And you smile as you walk ahead
While you leave me hanging over there

Sleeplessly in my bed

Should I give up or should I try harder

If you want me to follow, don't walk any farther

Cause I can't keep up with your pace

Yet I just cannot, I cannot quit this chase..

Reviews

[Eloha]

I find this very emotive and artistic. You seem to have existential themes running through your being, in addition.