Flameless

It happens 

Every time we're at the end of the line

You're falling

Falling in love with me in time

And I just

I just feel the same way like before

I guess I've been hurt too much

I lost my ways to love and I can't feel them anymore

You're like a flint but there's no spark

If you're the sun I'm in the dark 

You're pebble's ripples in the sea

Where my reflection I can't see

So are they

Not special enough to be in my life

Cause that's the

Way I feel when they're around

I can't seem

To find someone who dazzles me

Who bounces off the page

'Cause you are

You're like a flint but there's no spark

If you're the sun I'm in the dark 

You're pebble's ripples in the sea

Where my reflection I can't see

I can't see no ohhh

You're like a flint but there's no spark

If you're the sun I'm in the dark 

You're pebble's ripples in the sea

Where my reflection I can't see

It happens 

Every time we're at the end of the line

You're falling

Falling in love with me in time

And I just

I just feel the same way like before

I guess I've been hurt too much

I lost my ways to love and I can't feel them anymore

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you made your point in this poem.
"You're like a flint but there's no spark
If you're the sun I'm in the dark
You're pebble's ripples in the sea
Where my reflection I can't see"
When we want to be alone and find peace in mind and heart. Hard to open doors to love and friendship. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chantel]

I love this, especially the chorus. So good!!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

You're like a flint but there's no spark
If you're the sun I'm in the dark
You're pebble's ripples in the sea
Where my reflection I can't see

...............Your thoughts are great. Your poems is with good ending. great job.

[Meghan]

I really liked the repetitive chorus. It made the piece almost song like. I also liked how you tied the beginning to the end and brought the poem full circle. The repetitiveness really brought your point home. Great job.