Be

Just some lyrics I scribbled down, along with an easy four-chord rhythm..

We seek to find our place, 

Where do we belong?

A rush of emotions

Painted in this song

I wonder where you go

I wonder how you feel

I wonder when you're comin' home

Whom you're gonna -

Be, You can turn things, everything's upside

Down, You wear a smile when, everything isn't fine

I try to keep it up,

But you just pull me down

Life wouldn't be complicated

If love was just a noun

Fighting through the days

Too scared to get too close

But what you never see is

How fast the time by -

Goes, You can turn things, everything's upside

Down, You wear a smile when, everything isn't 

Fine, It's okay to, let it out 

Sometimes, It gets better, just make it through the climb

I wonder where you go

Cause you still pull me down

I wonder when you're comin' home

Cause love ain't just a noun

Fighting through the days

To find where we belong

But what you never see is

What's painted in this -

Song, You can turn things, everything's upside

Down, You wear a smile when, everything isn't 

Fine, It's okay to, let it out 

Sometimes, It gets better, just make it through the climb

Reviews

intriguing write i found this to be & quite wonderful. Brings a perfect sense to some things. {Enjoyable read}

[Chantel]

Really really good, love what you've said in this and also I really like how you formatted those parts, I don't know what you would technically call that but it's really cool, reminded me of Linkin Park or something :)
Wish I could hear this played! Great job!! :)

[goldenangel]

Breaths true to life.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

very very good. describes me perfectly.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the logic of this poem. Sometime after a hard climb. We feel our strongest. Nothing worthwhile is easy in a life. We must fight the good fight. Celebrate the victories and remember the losses. A excellent poem. You made me think. Thank you.
Coyote