Gemini

Through my made up multi-personality.

And just like a little kid

Looking away I admit

That I still play hide and seek, by myself

I run away from my own

The other me 's just a clone

'N I simply hate the way he thinks, clever brat

Don't try to change me

Into something that I'm not

The me from yesterday

Is someone I forgot

Don't try to talk your way

Out of this s**t

You were an angel

But your halo ain't lit

Sometimes I feel insecure

I don't know if you hold the cure

I don't know if I should risk, all of this

The things I keep to myself

Things that your class won't understand

Manipulating me through, me and you

Don't try to change me

Into something that I'm not

The me from yesterday

Is someone I forgot

Don't try to talk your way

Out of this s**t

You were an angel

But your halo ain't lit

So why won't you make up your mind

What would you know about my kind?

Half empty or half full? Firstly, I need a glass

Don't try to change me

Into something that I'm not

The me from yesterday

Is someone I forgot

Don't try to talk your way

Out of this s**t

You were an angel

But your halo ain't lit

Reviews

[BlackStar]

I think that this write is so witty (and true) hehe. I love the beginning most, mainly because I can relate to it. Then again, the chorus is so effective that altogether it makes it a great piece..I'd like to hear the tune to this, bet it's good eh? :)

[Chantel]

Love this, especially the chorus! Your words fit together so well, it was delightful to read, even on the level of only how the words fit. And then on top of that, your "made-up multiple personality" is really fascinating, this is the second piece I've enjoyed that you've written about that (second piece I've read too, of course). So I'm doing a terrible job explaining, but this is really great, keep writing please! :)

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i love the way you put all the words together :] this was great :D

[Rachel Koepke]

Don't try to change me
Into something that I'm not
The me from yesterday
Is someone I forgot
Don't try to talk your way
Out of this s**t
You were an angel
But your halo ain't lit
.....that was my fav part, really great writing. This is seriously good