Stepping On Needles

Just one of those nights where life decides to spit at you.

Oh please play something for me

A melody to help me on my way

The distance sometimes kills me

Some nights I need you but you're far away

Cause I've been going downhill 

And I can't find that strength to climb back up

You were always there to guide me

Now all I seem to do is just f**k up

And I always feel like I'm a step behind

N' I'm trying really hard 

But God knows how I feel so blind

Some night are really tough 

And I can't make it on my own

Hell seems to have arisen

The little time, that I've been left alone

Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

I like how you exaggerate the pain of lomneliness and the mere though of being left behind is really painful.

In this poem I notice the deep regret the speaker feels and that is rather a great sign

A nice write :)