60% me 40% you- It will never be enough

something new

I read your poem and i tried so hard to smile
(you had me murdered by the last lines)
i couldnt help but to think that your in denial
(and don't you dare ask why)

its inevitable- you say your better alone
so take these cold lonely nights- to defend what you wrote
you try so hard to prove- that you can be on your own
and start pushing away- who believes you the most

take advantage while you can- im still vulnurable 
here's your inspiration
push me to the side so i can watch you fall
here's your inspiration
you know that feeling you get when you feel you reject
what was working cuz then you cut it off "for the best"
and its not better at all
_______________________

see - i was there for when u needed it most
till u were no longer lonely and it f*****g explodes
like wow, though- heres to taking it slow
cupids a comedian and love is a joke

i think your crazy- i think your outta ya mind
i think your shady- like you have something to hide
i think your sexy- i think your hot and it shows
cuz your outta ya mind and im so out of control

so cheers to the bartending pedophile
and the tough girl that never smiles
bye bye- i dont want your apologies
your bad with comebacks- like your stenography

--------------------now im someone you lost
and with every tear drop your not as tough as you thought
remember you said/ you had "rules" and youd point to your head?
well by the next week they were torn into shreds
___________
Is that the best you can offer?
Is that the best you can do?
[thats right she took it there]

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