Too much

In which realm does love lie

Quietly waiting for the dawn

Come forth from the minds of
Small  minded fractured individuals  
Who in fact have never felt the pain
But life fragmented them with its greed

Such a shame
Such a good family
Yet still
Maybe they justed loved
too much

In her arms she cradles
The price she had to pay
To free her from
her daddy's love

Shameless child
She dreams of splender
Always a princess
Now her b*****d son
Screams in the night
No father in sight

She misses something
but isn't sure what
Love, the thing that filled the void
It had never been filled
So she wasnt sure she understood at all

Only pain warms her nights
Darkness in her palace
Diamonds have turned
themselves into the stars
in the sky
The beautiful child
in arms
already screams for it's freedom

One story ends
Where another begins

Freedom
What would you call
Freedom?

The ability to stop screaming
your pain
out into the world?

The pain will return
There will be little doubt
Watch what you chuck
the mirror will see it finds it's way back home

You can not rid yourself of the pain you hold
By screaming at another
By running away
By finding an idol to adore

The mother holds her child in arms
she has found a new god to worship

Be warned
Treat kindly with room to grow
Love
But let the seeds of youth expand thier own wings
The princess you hold
May be the goddess of life it self
But by your hands

Your screaming could distroy all the chances
She has to shine

Never turn her stars to diamonds

She will never thank you in the end

Reviews

[nowhere]

Love is free ,but life makes us pay. Its a shame it has to be that way. I agree,, never turn her stars to diamonds .

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Very well written. Love it!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Too much inside information. I am unable to find the
meat of this story.
It is beautifully written showing the labor of love of a
gifted individual who is brilliant and talented.
I continue with others.
------ Eagle Cruagh

[JeSSe]

i enjoy your poems i realy like this one =]

[The Joker]

How i relish agony and the way you paint these lines is a true mark of inspiring art

[Richielee]

in this case diamonds are NOT a girl's best friend,metaphoric magic here Pebs and advice which should be heeded .x