SMILE yOUR alive

SOMETHING HAPPENED
As i walked behind him
I felt the uncontrollable urge
To DANCE
Yep right there
IN THE MIDDLE OF THE STREET 
He was whistling
SNAPPIN HIS FINGERS 
to a tune playing inSIDE his head
Oh but i could hear it
FLOWING THROUGH ME
My shoes seeming to tap in just the right way
Seeming to mingle with this sudden
MUSICAL MADNESS 
we were creating
I lifted my head HIGHER
Than i had for days
Hell life was much BRIGHTER when your
Looking at the sky
Instead of at the dirt below your feet
With a tap an a click
an a clicK
an a whistle
And i twirled around 
In circles
Breathing in joy
It was then that I noticed he was no longer in front of me
Right now i'd found myself a new song
I was playing to my own unique beat
LIFE FELT GOOD
Looking up
instead of down at my feet

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A stark and fighting spirit within the wording lends to the fact , the reader needs to be slapped about the ears nose and throat, well done, good read.

[Pebbles]

Thank you this is very old - you’ve dragged me back to this poetic playground- maybe in isolation it is time to write again

[Charlie Sheen]

How bout brillant writer of the earth kicks a*s nonstop.
Your a poetic ninja highkicking a*s wherever you may roam over the yellow brick road all the way to the end of the earth better known as Utah.

You cant deni talent or good drugs once being im clean i wouldnt know anything about Winning

[Violeta]

This is inspiring... I've had my own dark times in life, and the way you put this renewed happiness into words is beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us. :)

Violeta

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I almost feel like she be the back of a book's description. It's almost like a newspaper the way things are bolded and capitalized. i really like the style! I never thought i would enjoy something like this but i did! It's really creative and I like it! the only con i have is that the title of this poem should be "you're" instead of "your"

[JeSSe]

=] great read i realy like your poems i can feel them almost like music

[Lauren_Jane_96]

another amazing poem, Congrats! x

[ecept]

This is really good, i like the style of this write. nice job

[Richielee]

good girl! great use of capitals here adds to the effect,hell i think i may have a little dance now....now where did i leave my Lady Gaga cd? lol xx

[An owl on the moon]

This was such a celebration of life...sharing a song with another, and finding your own tune to carry you through the bright days and dark nights. Brilliant and lifting.. and very danceable!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Happy Happy! A fine tale of affirmation, that we are viable individuals with a unique spirit. I enjoyed this very much! (toes tapping, here I go...)