Within a twisted mind

Within that twisted mind
she stands alone
Waiting for the winter of her sorrows to end
Long ago
She wept for a freedom she couldnt find
Behind his misted green eyes of jealousy
He lost her
Way before she lost herself
A moment before madness took hold
She held him and smiled
She had learnt not to feel
The void of darkness now pulling her under

Please free me from all that holds on too tight
Free me from my own desires which cripple my existence
And leave me naked in the rain of my youth

Hell
One day she will be oh so wise
People will come and bare witness to her pain
On walls where emotions run high
but for today she is still within the mould
Being created within her skin
Her desire is begining to scorch her soul into
submission  
Turning corners
She looks back with no regret
Yet it is with a hollow heart she leaves behind
All that she has grown to know as the truth

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

'This is more like it. Now I know where you
are coming from.
"Too late in the day for a decent review. I will
return and do it properly.
=----- Eagle Cruagh

[Judy Ponceby]

beautifully done pebs. can feel the dark, the longing she should feel but doesn't. excellent imagery

[Richielee]

great format and again emotionaly wrought write with deep meaning ,stand up and take a bow young Pebs x