Fallen Angel :(

When red turns
To a subtle shade of purple
Which in turn
Holds me in wanting
Afraid to give in
Give up
But the feeling of failure
Is runing through
Every vein in my body
Ive gone from Angel to demon in just
30 seconds
How did it happen
The buttons have been continually
Pressed
Over and over
Again and again
And you lite the fuse
And then I screamed all the thoughts inside my head
The ones that conveyed the way you were making me feel
And yes I think your selfish
Within your little bubble of denial
And yes Im not quite the angel you thought I was
Im seeing purple turning back to red
And Im screaming
And scratching at walls
Trying to jump high enough
Then falling flat on my face
Hell you win
Drain me
Take every dam thing and screw you
Cos I just cant be bothered
Think anyone would be interested in buying a fallen halo
I dont want to be an angel
I dont think I have the strength anymore

Reviews

[Aidz]

Ying yang of the emotions pulled n pushed

Enjoyed the read :)

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Well my friend and may i say spitfire of the page I tell ya one thing you gotta razor for a tongue i truley admire that about you honestly hell Pebbles you always hit the mark and thank the lord im not the target

Hell you hit em outta the park everytime this is further proof of that throws ya bottle you desserve it stay crazy your favorite bartender Gonzo

[Melobldnfr]

Quite poignant to me at this time, thanks.

[OT]

well done with this one - great storytelling indeed - poetically told - nice!

[Richielee]

nicely done Pebs xxx

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Great storytelling here. I honestly think we all have the capacity to at least once in awhile, rise to the occasion.
Nice poetry, Pebbles.