Best kept secrets

I have a secret which I can never share
With another
I have the secret that would change the worlds of people
who don't quite understand the way I think
Do I understand
Im not sure
Its not so black and white anymore
Love
Love comes and goes
Love
Comforts for a while then leaves
Us dissatisfied
Yearning for tomorrows embrace
Screaming that something is still missing
I have a secret to hold
Within
And Im allowed
If its my choise to keep
Its nothing bad
Just
Its mine
And I never think it would do anyone good
To know inside
How I stretch across moment s
Scratching at the surface
And I see a face at the window
I know Ive known you before
But I wouldnt want to scare you
With my knowing
I know you are my karmic debt
I promised to keep
Moments before my longing for life chucked me forward
Into this existence
And I know you would never believe me
So its best not said
How I think Ive loved you since time began
because your a part of me
How maybe your my brother
My father
My teacher
My angel
My love
My everything
My self
This is my secret
I will never share
Because
The walls are screaming for comfort
And the doors are closing in my face
Can you feel the softness of my skin against the glass of the window?
The coldness burns
Best secrets lie deeper still
Until death betrays me

Reviews

[Melobldnfr]

Wow. Just fabulous! I so GET this. MORE than GET this! Just 'nail on the head' if you ask me. Brilliant.

[Seashell]

aww waw !! This is full of Love for someone who can't be physically with you. It is so painful to have to keep a secret for all of your life when all you want to do is burst to release the pressure. These secrets are the best secrets ...how special...to be held captive in your heart for ever and ever...no one knows..just you..and your soul.
Thanks for beautiful write
Babs x

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

My friend your writes ive watched turn into some of the best work ive come across love is a subject i avoid like cancer well heartbreak and addiction and perversion seems to be more my cup of tea.

Your writes have that way of making the reader feel that your truley speaking from your soul your a great writer and honestly it is a honor to call you and my amigo Rich friend keep writing cause honestly i also a fan cheers


John

[Richielee]

''karmic debt'' love that,hot diggity dawg Pebs this is another beaut from the annals of your poetic mind x