Don't ask

Look right now i don't really care what your thinking
I just want you to leave me alone
I don't want anyone to care 
I see truths in shadows
Blackness looms
Negative forces crawling around me
Please don't ask me if im ok
It makes me want to break
Down
break out
Break every damn bone in my own body
Because thats how it feels
Someone has taken my heart and soul and trampled
Quite freely with no worry
Except for their own damn pleasure
Don't look for me within shadows
They are mine god damn you
And they are all I have left
Dont take them from me
I am suffocated here
Breathing is as hard as it possibly could be
So so so
Leave me sitting in this corner
Hell I know you understand
Be a good girl now
I know you can be
Ha ha
Tomorrow when I come out of hidding
And you know I will
Remember not to ask me
The one thing I cant handle right now

Reviews

[Aidz]

Fair enuff I wont ask....

Engaging

[Richielee]

the need to be on one's own can be so overpowering it takes a good friend to understand and can be confusing in someone's overall view of another if they keep dropping out.you put this perfectly x

[OT]

oh this is a powerful heart-bled write - the emotions - throughout - a personal write for sure - do not ask lest you break down - a great write!

[Lily Mae]

I think the Full Moon on the 15th during an eclipse has us all feeling the hidden Pandora's boxes we've have inside...and exploding them wide open... A powerful write Peb's ...love you..x

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime need to be alone. Better to mourn in private. I like the ending. Please don't ask questions to rebirth a wound. I like the way you wrote the story in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote