GET me out of here!

Creativity spiraling ever backwards
Not wanting or needing
the words that
scream inside my head
Getting them out seems so much harder
Than i ever imagined possible
Hear me
Feel me
Scream my name at midnight
So that i know that your there
Life
Become deafening
Sitting here
Listening to my heartbeat
You come bringing flowers
I smile
Rip off the heads and eat your friendship whole
For a moment sit 
come hold your arms around
my very presence
Making the pain subside for just a while
And then I will put on my mask
Of sweetness and light
And hold myself by invisible strings
Cut me down
Cut me down
Dont be a fool
Ha
Little do you know the mind of madness
That runs around my head
Suffer not little people
For today I will find a new pain
A new touture
Or if im really lucky
A new river
What?
Yes of course i know what i mean
Rivers flow forward
I will flow freely
Move onward
I can't stay in here anymore
Its killing me
Slowly
Like cancer of the mind
Do you remember how it sounds when a piece of chalk scraps
Down the black board?
Or how you feel when two spoons are scratched togeather
Well thats what life felt like today
And there was nothing I could do to stop it
So if you would put away your things next time
Im hoping it wont happen again
Be wise
Be careful
And never listen to the madman
He is no ones fool
And behind that mask lies
A pool so dark and deep
Be you sure you can tend the beast
Within
For he will not wait for the chosen hour

But will pounch on you when you least expect ..

Reviews

[Joel M Frye]

The madman and the beast within together in one stanza...and no, they do not wait, but choose the hour themselves. Well done, Pebbs.

[Coyote Poetry]

I really like this poem. So many statements stood out. I like the way you set-up the poem.
"Be wise
Be careful
And never listen to the madman "
Some wisdom in your words. More madman then logical men in this world. Better to research and make your own decisions. I like the way you ended the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

Wow... I hate to say that because your write is so brilliant and deserves so much more then that... Yet you have wowed me.. I love the sense of balance being served and your desire for inner peace...a satisfaction in a sense...xx Great write..I bow to you.. :) xx

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

When the fury of words come they nees releasing.

[Richielee]

bad language time I'm afraid...f*****g awesome Pebs,s**t kickingly deep and lessons to be learnt within,what an intelligent mind you have : )

[Audrey Howitt]

How often I have sat with myself and been of two minds--the polite side of me and the side that wanted to scream. You touched a part of me that I would like to think we all feel from time to time.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pebbles I don't know what stirred up enough to inspire this write, but oh my goodness, this is magnificent!

[ju]

love the flow of this- angry, frustrated words in such a calm and pleasant tone.

[Aidz]

Nice sweet write... NOT!! nice n dark juss the wayz I like em, some wonderful lines in this... well done
Luvin this bit

You come bringing flowers
I smile
Rip off the heads and eat your friendship whole