In the eye of my dreamtime

If only I could hold this moment
Within the eye of my dreamtime
Just so long
that it will turn into the reality
I so desire
When moments turn to look for minutes
Within the hour of your day
Will you then be free
To sail the clouds of knowing
And swim the ocean of understanding
Through which window
Do you desire
To fly
Come make no joke of freedom
It is real when only
You are free to ride the waves
And caress the storm which
Lay upon your doorstep
Ride high the ever knowing
Silence will be within
Your heart
Keep it safe
Keep it hidden
This way
You will be able to keep it forever
Within the eye of your dream time

Reviews

[northern monkey]

Love this.Like a dreamy, soothing walk on the beach. Keep it coming...........

[ice]

Very nice concept, and story line, Pebbles.
The dream thread was sown throught the poem, very nicely.

"If only I could hold this moment
Within the eye of my dreamtime"

I like that..like looking with a third eye.
enjoyed

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This poem is like a dream in itself, and may your heart too be safe for always my friend.

[Kiri Nells]

Very deeply emotional and thought provoking. What is it with people writing things that make me think? :) Lot's of emotion and beautifully written. Great write!

[Lily Mae]

No truer words can be said. I love the beauty and truth in this poem Pebbles. It is soft and the use of the elements...well it always wins me over:) Great write..xx