Dilated iris

Dilated iris

A Poem by Pebbles

It didnt seem right
I'd grown attached
Not too attached
Well maybe too attached
But not in a dangerous way
Not in a god this will f**k your head up kinda way
In a care about how your doing way
In a I like to see your face way
In a I'd miss you if you weren't around kinda way
And I cared about the fact that you did't seem to like me
Would of fought with me  
Cremated all that was real
When before it felt like  
You protected me
Stood up for me

Then you were gone
How do I rationalize that?
One minute here
Then not
Well I don't rationalise it
I won't deny
That I cried
Bitterness
Disallusioned
But its ok now
Things move forward
Realization sinks in
New beginings
God it feels so much better now
In a dilated iris kinda way

© 2011 Pebbles


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Beautiful! Just...Amazing! This stirs up a lot of emotions. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


excellent! life comes and goes a little and, often, so do ppl. this piece stirs many feelings and memories. well written, pebbles. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


and with time all will be better. Awesome write Pebbles

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is one of my all time favorites of yours. You really twist it up by referencing the
dilated iris.. perfect and unique for sure..x

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 10, 2011
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Pebbles
Pebbles

Bristol, South West, United Kingdom



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If I didnt write I would probably go out of my mind, I am inspired by everything and everyone around me, you want to know more about me just read my poetry ... all is good in my world .... The film .. more..

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