No Tears

I wrote this to no one in particular

 

No Tears

You can rip out my heart

Smash it into the floor

Stake me

Choke me

Drown me

I'll put on a fake smile

And say, "I can handle it."

But I won't cry

 

You can humiliate me

Crush my soul to nothing

Trick me

Deceive me

Hate me

I'll laugh about it

And lie, "You meant nothing." 

But I won't cry

 

You can say I'm meaningless

And try to stab me in the back

Kill me

Haunt me

Torture me

I'll spit in your face

And give you empty threats

But I will not cry

 

I will not cry

Because I will

Never

Fall to someone like you

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this poem on an emotional fit... what do think of my emotional fit?

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

I like the writing structure of your poem. You do convey the extreme emotions of disappointing love and hurt over someone's callous attitude. Cry if you need to, slap them silly and say goodby. There's lots of other people who can become real friends and appreciate you.

[K.J. Bryen]

Wow. This great. I love how strong and angered you sound in the poem. Really, really good :)

[ForeverNever]

O.M.G. This...was breathtaking.It seems like you took the jumbled thoughts and drew thm out into this...its simply beautiful.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Pain. I like this piece. Don't cry. I do. 1 tear is my limit. This was a good write.

[T. Logan]

This is a really emotional poem, that i think will speak to a lot of people. Everybody has pain, right?

[Hidden Happiness]

i think emotional fits are sometimes good cuz it gives birth to something like this...i have felt like this and i can really relate n the first verse was my favourite....really amazing piece and thanks for commenting on my stuff..it means a lot:):):):).