I really like this! Especially the chorus! It's so well written!
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thank you casey!
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Of course! I've only been able to complete one song as after I went Over it I realized how crappy it.. read moreOf course! I've only been able to complete one song as after I went Over it I realized how crappy it was lol! I am so impressed :)
... I don't play any instruments, I just hear the song in my head and write it lolz I can hear what .. read more... I don't play any instruments, I just hear the song in my head and write it lolz I can hear what I want played... I just have no idea how to communicate that.
Rhythmically rocking like a bitching guitar solo in at a sweaty small venue.
If I could make a suggestion "You can't hide it" to just "You can't hide"?
Always,
Matthew
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Posted 11 Years Ago
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I'll take your advice :) and thank you for your comment
I liked it, though it could've used a little more lyrics. Like a 2nd & 3rd verse, but it isn't a bad start, not at all. And I can hear the instruments too, it's radical really, just a little short
AMAZING!!!!!!!! I wish I could right songs, but sadly, I'm not a poet. XD But you are amazing! I would totally listen to this song if it were on the radio!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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aw, thank you dark rider, it means a lot, and you can too write poetry!
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Not good poetry like you. Trust me, I've tried writing songs before, and they didn't turn out good.
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why don't you at least post one and let other people be the judge of that?
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Becuase the last one I tried writing was a few years back, and I barely finished the chorus. XD
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Not to mention I lost the parrots I wrote it on. XD
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lolz XD
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Yeah, that, and my sister would laugh a little every time she found something I did try to write, so.. read moreYeah, that, and my sister would laugh a little every time she found something I did try to write, so I liked to keep it hidden. And then I just never had any inspiration.
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I'd just be like, "Oh yeah, and what are you doing in your spare time? Weed?" In a joking way, but t.. read moreI'd just be like, "Oh yeah, and what are you doing in your spare time? Weed?" In a joking way, but that's just me and how I am when someone finds my writing and is like "what is this?" because some of the stuff I write can be really, really dark. I just don't post the dark stuff.
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XD That would be both funny and would not work on my sister. But I'll try something like that next t.. read moreXD That would be both funny and would not work on my sister. But I'll try something like that next time.
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lolz You should
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Especially when school is over. XD
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:)
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I don't see how you make writing this look so easy.
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Some of its easy, some of it I just bluff that its easy. Its just that I write literally Non, Stop. .. read moreSome of its easy, some of it I just bluff that its easy. Its just that I write literally Non, Stop. So I've been getting my practice in.
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Well, it pays off, that's for sure. :)
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I just hope I can get better than i am now.
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I'm sure you will. You're already off to a great start!
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thank you, and you know, you are, too. Don't give me too much credit, I'm not even published.
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Well, you should be!
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That's the dream, for all of us. However, I remember something i heard on a show I watch, Full Metal.. read moreThat's the dream, for all of us. However, I remember something i heard on a show I watch, Full Metal Alchemist, it went something like this, "The pleasure of a dream is that its just a fantasy. Once it really happens, its not a dream anymore, its real life." I think if you realize that and you still want your dream more than anything, then that's what you should do. I certainly do.
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*squeals* FULLMETAL ALCHEMISTS IS MY NEW OBSESSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEAM ED ALL THE WAY!!!!!!!<.. read more*squeals* FULLMETAL ALCHEMISTS IS MY NEW OBSESSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEAM ED ALL THE WAY!!!!!!!
*clears throat* Yes, I remember the episode that was from, from and I have to agree with it. But that shouldn't stop us from dreaming anyway.
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No it shouldn't, but what I took away from that is that you shouldn't just dream, you should do what.. read moreNo it shouldn't, but what I took away from that is that you shouldn't just dream, you should do what it is that you want. That way, its not a fantasy, its your life.
And OMG I FREAKIN' LOVE ED SO MUCH I WANT TO HAVE HIS CHILD AND MARRY HIM AND BE WITH HIM FOREVER IN MY FANGIRL DREAMS!!!!!
*clears throat*
But, yeah.
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Yeah, that is sort of what we should do.
OMG! ME TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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However, I kind of have a thing for mustang...
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Oh yes. Mustang is very hot, but I will forever be Ed's. XD
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I'm still deciding, I'm only on episode 22. I might take Mustang, I'll see.
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but I love ed!
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We shall fight over him! XD
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Or I might choose Mustang, it really depends. Because I like Ed for obvious reasons, but Mustang... .. read moreOr I might choose Mustang, it really depends. Because I like Ed for obvious reasons, but Mustang... hm... why is this so hard?!
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Because their both just so smexy!! XD
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lolz ikr!!!!!!
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Yes, and way better than Alex Armstrong. XD He puts Edward Cullen to shame!
XD Then again, he gets put to shame by a short (Sorry, Ed!), 15 year old boy, so it's not hard for a.. read moreXD Then again, he gets put to shame by a short (Sorry, Ed!), 15 year old boy, so it's not hard for anyone to put him to shame. XD
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lolz I know (Sorry Ed, but you really are short)
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But what he lacks in hieght, he makes up for in smexiness. XD
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