There You Are Again

my attempt at a girl-ish punk rock song

There You Are Again

How many times

Topping today

Have I told you

To stay away

But no

You just

Can't wait

To get under my skin

Again

 

How much time

Was wasted

Spent on you

To make your exit

But I have to say

You're relentless

*For reals?*

 

Because every time

I turn around

There you are

Following without a sound

A shadow, nothing more

Who needs to find some freaking

Solid ground

 

Dude, this is getting weird

Not to sound like a jerk

But the way you lurk

It's not sexy...

It's just creepy...

 

So here's to another

F*****g girl

To tell another

F*****g boy

To take a hike

 

But that stupid

F*****g girl

And that same

F*****g boy

Can't seem to take a hint

And get it right

 

*Oh, so what, now you're telling me it's the circle of life?*

 

Because every time

I turn around

There you are

Following without a sound

A shadow, nothing more

Who needs to find some freaking

Solid ground

 

Because every time

I turn around

There you are

Following without a sound

A shadow, nothing more

Who needs to find some f*****g

Solid ground

 

Dude, seriously

Not to sound like a jerk

But the way you lurk

Is not sexy

Trust me

It's just creepy

 

*What the hell are you doing?*

 

Author's Note

the italicized words represent talking instead of singing. well, this was my attempt at a girl-ish punk rock song, but give me your honest opinion about it. I thought it was kind of Avril L. or something Pink-like when I was writing it. Opinions? Please review.

Reviews

[Courtney]

Ya I could definitely see Avril L. singing this song. It would make a good song, it could also just be a poem. Good write.

[Acron 4]

other then the fact that I still cant get over a young lady using profanity, It's a kinda in your face , full of angst, and frustration song..........you kids grow up so fast, your wired all together different then my generation. I don't think you guys growing up so fast has a lot to do with the tech stuff, because my generation was said to have grown to fast as well, but it seems by the time you youngsters are able to hold a phone in your hand, your texting. nuff said about that, good song.........thanks for sharing

[RachelReaper]

haha, sorry about the swear words, I try not to use them, but in the world of punk rock, well, sometimes it can't be helped...
but seriously thank you for the review!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I can definely picture Avril Lavigne singing this, well done Rachel :)

[C.C. Marx]

You tell him girl!! I love the attitude and the snark, the way a real voice came through, its was very nicely done :)